[Perestroika]

Seems fine, honestly you know the players tendencies and their view of you better than us so asking us really will get improper replies.

On a basic level, if you would actually do this with the king high flush draw I like it a lot better, not sure if you do...Also your story seems plausible which might get them to lay down a decent flush.

Back to what I was saying earlier, you know them better so I assume neither are "I has a flush I can't fold" type players because then this is major spew. Also you have to have a decent image in terms of not spewing a lot for this to get 8-J high flush to fold. I just don't see the queen folding.