Re: Absolute Cheating
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They all concluded that it was beyond improbable that POTRIPPER or DOUBLEDRAG knew what there opponents cards were
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This sentence should be taken out back and shot.
Instead, try "It was obvious to everyone that POTRIPPER and DOUBLEDRAG knew what their opponents' cards were."
Also, establish the credibility of your "peers" by saying "who are some of the best players I know. These players, besides being quite accomplished in the poker world, include professionals such as lawyers, engineers, [insert other professions of HSL 2+2ers here]."
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lol i'm an engineer, not a English major, take it easy [img]/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
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Sorry, I didn't mean it in a bad way, it is just that the rest of the post flows pretty well, then that monster of a sentence comes out. I am a lawyer and I edit drafts as a part of my work. Sometimes I forget that others have pride of authorship issues that I got over a long time ago.
Sorry if I came off too harshly.
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