[SamIAm]

I liked this rhyme the most:
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'S IN THE CRADLE YO, MY GLOCK SHINES HARD, DOG
I'M AT THE RANGE SQUEEZIN OFF DA ROUNDS, DOG

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Oh, besides your 3 line rhyme at the end:
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BLAM BLAM BLAM

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