[andyfox]

Part of being a great teacher is using language that is easily understandable. Sometimes your grammar and syntax are less than ideal. If you do decide to do the algebra book, and since A) I often think like a ten-year old; B) you and I are such close friends; and C) I got an 800 on the math portion of the SAT (admittedly just after the Johnson administration, and I'm talking Andrew Johnson), I'd be happy to serve as your editor in my spare time, gratis, and without credit.