Thread: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
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Old 02-16-2007, 03:38 AM
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Default Re: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
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Commas and mechanics i agree... but... the thing about shoulders i don't understand.

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sk00lb0y: how long have you been studying the english language?
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