Thread: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
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Old 02-16-2007, 01:42 AM
Lonhro Lonhro is offline
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Default Re: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
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I could feel my heartbeats choking their way up through my stomach

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Should probably change that to chest
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