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Old 12-11-2005, 11:14 AM
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Default Re: banging chicks from myspace.com

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Spladle I agree with the others that your introduction is too wordy. You just go on and on. I like [censored]'s opener a lot better. It is intriguing. Brevity can be cool. Your entire introduction could be shortened to one line.


"Saw one of your pics - Yummy!!"

(I like this opener better.)

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I like this one better to.

blake