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I can't believe I sifted through over 3 pages here. I believe the story is well written...but fiction never the less. The antennae went up almost immediately. I like the style and it could certainly have been written by a college student.

The story line, although interesting, got a stretched a little thin after the third chapter. I think he went away because he went on to another assignment and lost interest in the story. You can only hold up a charade for so long.

I think he's an aspiring fiction writer with a future ahead of him.